Love how every word has a reason to be there and really expresses your emotion. This poem is very realatable especially in hard times, it is very true. Love the rhythm! Missing the positive? Great job ! (:
WORD. I have'nt a clue what this is saying, but it seems like it is a bundle of hatered and immortalness. much like you.. Sooo great job. YA GARBAGE BROO.
This poem is really well written. It's really good.
ReplyDeleteLove how every word has a reason to be there and really expresses your emotion. This poem is very realatable especially in hard times, it is very true. Love the rhythm! Missing the positive? Great job ! (:
ReplyDeleteWORD. I have'nt a clue what this is saying, but it seems like it is a bundle of hatered and immortalness. much like you.. Sooo great job. YA GARBAGE BROO.
ReplyDeleteWOW ALEX THIS IS SO GOOD. I WILL SATISFY THE NARCISSISTIC BEAST IN YOU BY TELLING YOU HOW AMAZING THIS IS <3
ReplyDeleteYou are truly funny!
DeleteThis was so deep and awesome that a part of me got bored and left my being to inhabit your soul instead. Perfect Jooooooooob!
ReplyDeleteI like the thought of tearing oneself open to see if he is still alive.
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